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I can feel her eyes staring through me
Shining bright as a candle’s flame
I can see her body slowly nearing my own
The space between us closing out
I can smell her hair
A mix of peaches and cherries
Intoxicates me
I can hear her voice
The most seductive whisper as she leans in closer
Telling me that I’m what she wants
I hear her gasp
As her lips
Press themselves against mine
I hear her moan
And watch her eyelids flutter –

She seems so in love.

But love
What is love
I still find myself wondering…

As her eyes stare through me
I stare at the ground
When her body leans towards mine
I lean away
While she speaks so softly to me
I tune out her voice
When her lips touch mine
I feel no emotion
And while her eyes close
Mine remain open.

Love
What is love
That’s the question that will haunt me to my grave.

Yet…love
Why love
When you can live just fine…resisting?
This is the English and original version of my poem, "Resistiendo."
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Here's your answer: Love is an instinctive mechanism that ensures we try to pass pur genes to the next generation.
Great poem anyway, really intense.
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Jezmine-Guardia Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Writer
Fabulous analysis of love Wink/Razz And thanks very much ^_^
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
You're welcome. But I was just aplying some biology to the concept of love.
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Jezmine-Guardia Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Writer
Creative.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Thanks
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dorroaker Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student General Artist
who know
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